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vom Erntemond Deutsch Kurzhaars
Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:12 pm
by Kurzhaar
I have been slowly working on my website and have enough finished to start leeting people know about it. There is much to be fixed and added, though. Please take a quick look. If you have any comments please let me know.
www.vomerntemond.com
Jim Smith
Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:41 pm
by honeyrun
Jim,
FYI, here is a typo for you to fix.
we regularly use out dogs to recover
This comes from your About Us page.
Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 5:27 pm
by sudiegirl
it looks really neat!!
Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:30 pm
by grant
Nice job Jim!
Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 11:37 am
by Country-Side Breeders
Hi Jim-
Looks to be the start of a nice site...easy to see, not a lot of clutter, and easy to navigate around. I went to all the pages and found a few typos:
On the home page... We are rebuilding out (our) website, please excuse our mess
On the About us page... He is also a (I don't know this, but should there be an "A" here? I don't test German tests so I'm not sure...sorry if it's correct) Verbandsrichter approved to evaluate dogs
Also on the About us page... is in the midst of his Apprenticship (ApprenticEship) to be a DK Formwertrichter
On the News page... However, on Saturday he could not resis(T) the quail walking in front of him
I would also suggest not putting where the kids go to school or the location and would only mention that they attend "a" vetmed childcare...not mentioning the "the" so that it isn't address specific (although I can see how there wouldn't be one on every corner and that it is quite possibly the only one around, but someone not from the area would find it easier to find it that way)...can't be too safe these days. By the way, is that childcare center focused on vet med for kids or is it a regular daycare center in the school that your wife attends? That's pretty interesting that there is a childcare center there, if it's vetmed centered for kids as well.
